Feedback Of Our Pitch

On the 7th our group went first to present our pitch, the presentation method we used was Prezzi. We presented our work to the rest of the class as a group, each member of our group spoke and explained all the different parts to our teen film.
I think the presentation went pretty well, every member of our group contributed and we were all confidant in what we were presenting. The presentation that we created on Prezzi was extremely helpful when presenting our work to the rest of the class, because it was clear for us to understand as well as the rest of the class to understand, it also conveyed our story line extremely well.
At the end of our presentation our teacher commented on our pitch saying that she was impressed with our work so far. We received both positive and negatives of our work from the audience and teacher, the feedback was:

Positive:
That the sound track that our group chose was prefect for the opening  of our teen movie.
That our costumes for the two central characters- the nerd and the mean girl creates the perfect outlook of their roles
That our camera shot types for every scene as been well thought out and planned so that we get the
filming movement on point

Negative:
- The most obvious factor which totally slipped out of our groups mind while preparing the pitch was to include who are target audience was, though, Rebecca allowed us to include it later as it wasn't such an important point.
- Another obvious mistake we made was to add a screen shot of our story board up to show a visual idea of the opening of our teenage film, but again we made time to upload it up into our presentation.