FEEDBACK OF OUR PITCH

 On Monday, our group was the first group to present the pitch in front of the class, we presented the pitch using Prezzi, we split different parts of the presentation to each member of our group so that we all had something to explain tot he class. I think we all presented it quite confidently and explained everything clearly and properly and that our Prezzi  presentation mad our presentation all the more interesting and made it easier to understand our plan for our teenage film.
 Overall, the teacher was very impressed with our group and how we delivered our Pitch Presentation, we also received useful feedback that will help develop on our opening of the teenage film for example:

POSITIVE FEEDBACK:
     - Soundtracks we have chosen is perfect as it build the perfect teenage atmosphere.
     - Our props fits the characters well making it easy to distinguish the stereotypical characters.
     - Our camera shot types is suitable to film Kane skating as he does not know how to skate, the method of us holding and guiding him is practical as we will only be filming his legs and the skateboard.

IMPROVEMENTS:
    - We forgot to mention our target audience by pinpointing that it will be a film suitable a large audience meaning for young and old teenagers and even for adults as they will all be able to relate to the storyline as  they can reminisce their younger times.
    - Another point we forgot to include was the screen shots of our storyboards, i think this was resulted through our group rushing on the last minute even though we did take screen shots and downloaded it to the file but we forgot to paste it onto our Prezzi presentation. However, our teacher allowed us to add it         in :)